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1. Please reflect on the last 13 days of rehearsal. Other than the selections sung on the concert, what have you learned? Consider any new concepts, vocal techniques, etc.

I have learned so much as well as gotten lots of confidence just in the little time Mrs. Bryan has been here. I have learned how to sing out with ways to do that well-sounding good. The choir teacher before was good and taught us a lot but it is nice to have a new choir teacher, Mrs. Bryan, to teach us new skills and techniques to make us better singers.


2. Thinking about Monday evening’s performance; What are two things you personally did well? What is one thing you could improve for our next performance?

The performance on Monday I felt went really well for me because I had lots of confidence more than I would before in a concert. The last time I did a choir concert was in Middle School this was my second high school choir concert so I loved singing with other people. One thing I feel like I did well at was with singing out well having a good sound. I also thought as an overall group we sang pretty well and we had a good sound. Also, as a group, I think we were good at singing the song, and most of us took the techniques you gave to us and used that at the concert. Saying that I think there are more techniques that I could learn, and with the techniques that I have learned to improve on those techniques as well.