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After reading both sentences and comparing them, we can choose the following options as to what the revised sentence does NOT do:
C. Use a participial phrase
What is a participial phrase?
- A participial phrase is formed by a participle, present or past, and other words that complement the meaning of that participle. This type of phrase functions as an adjective in the sentence, modifying a noun.
- Example: Exhausted by the exercise, Jason fell to the floor.
How about the revised sentence?
- The revised sentence does not contain a participial phrase. Notice that we cannot find a participle at all in the sentence, be it present or past, much less a whole participial phrase.
- The sentence, however, is compound. It also incorporates an equal adjective starter and uses an infinitive phrase (to change).
- With the information above in mind, we can choose letter C as the correct option.
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